雅思写作中有些错误是一定要避免的。比如下面这五个。
常见错误1: 单词搭配不熟悉
Students can reap the benefit from the advantages of technology in their study life.

注意，这里reap the benefit from是错误用法，正确用法是reap benefit by taking advantages of technologies in their study life.

很明显，这位同学并不清楚这个单词的搭配，而且reap benefit属于比较生僻的

用法，能用是好事，可一定要确定用对，否则不如不用。

常见错误2: 单词随意使用
Nevertheless, I convinced that traditional education method is a better way to

prepare students for their in later life.

注意，sb be convinced that是固定搭配，这种错误完全可以避免，同学在写

convinced that时就能注意到，这里convinced的词性显然不对，这么写要么是过

去时，要么是形容词，倒推可发现，要么时态错误了，要么就是缺少了be 动词，千万不要在这么基础的地方犯错。

常见错误3: 过多there be句型
There are several controversies about whether it is too late to do anything to

improve the situation, which human activities have negative effects on ecological

diversity.

注意，当你想表达哪里有什么，又觉得自己使用了太多次there be句型时，完全

可以将它改为：there exist several controversies about…的句型，同时记住当后

面是名词单数形式，那么使用there exists, 复数则使用there exist。这能很好的

缓解重复there be的问题。

常见错误4: persons的复数概念及用法
Most people were educated as independent person such as did washes and

homework by themselves when they were studying at school.

注意，作者这里写的independent person原本是想表达独立个体的意思。但却忘

记了句子开头是most people，所以我们要使用persons。也许你想问，为什么不

用people呢？这里原因有两个：1. 句子开头已经用了一次people, 再用就显得累

赘；2. persons可以用于academic essay， 它和people的区别是指，persons往往指的是多个独立个体，类似于individuals, 而people则指的是一群人，一类人。比如： You are no longer just two independent persons, but on this day you have become one.

常见错误5: 观点句描述事实
题目是：In some societies, more and more people choose to live on their own.

What is the reason for this, and is it a positive or negative trend?

作者的回答： 
Living independently means that individuals should work hard to

support themselves rather than rely on their parents, which also reduces the

burden of their parents
.

作者认为独立生活是个好的趋势，因为个体为了养活自己而不靠父母，他们就

必须很努力的工作。很显然，这是一句事实而非观点。独立生活自然不靠父母，自然要自己努力工作了。更合理的写法是：

Living independently is seen to be positive in terms of personal skill development

and economic perspective. People who live alone should work hard to support

themselves rather than rely on their parents, which also reduces the burden of their parents.
今天就先说这五个错误，各位考鸭不妨对照下自己的作文，看看是否也存在这样的问题。
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