高分作文都需要哪些结构？
剑桥雅思系列考官范文中
唯一一个在每篇文章都重复的结构是...
“ and”
“ and”
“ and”


并列结构

没有你们想像的那么高大上!
比如这篇满分作文段落, 出现了4个and,同时neither nor, rather than,2个并列结构,总共6个并列结构！！
剑桥7 Test3
Of course not everyone enjoys their work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality . Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labour relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.


今天的将会教你3种写出并列结构的方法


What + How
I will swim, bike and run this weekend.
I will be swimming, then bike, and then run this weekend.  
3 ways to write parallel structure (abc+recipe)
Use structures below to revise b or c
1.verbs
v1+n1 and v2+n2
same tense
same structure
same logic
E.g.
a: online education
b: enable us to study wherever we are
c: make our lives efficient
E.g.
a: online education
b: enable us to study wherever we are and schedule lessons flexibly
c: make our lives efficient
2. part of b or c : noun, adv,
v1+adv1 and adv2
v1+n1 and n2
E.g.
a: online education
b: enable us to study wherever we are
c: make our lives efficient
E.g.
a: online education
b: enable us to study wherever we are (adv.) and without time constraint
c: make our lives efficient
3. explain b or c  
E.g.
a: online education
b: enable us to study wherever we are
c: make our lives efficient
E.g.   v1+n1 v2+n2
a: online education
b: enable us to study wherever we are
c: save our time spent on traveling to physical schools
   and allow us to study at a more cozy environment than schools
E.g. n1+n2
a: online education
b: enable us to study wherever we are
c: avoid the time and financial cost caused by travelling to physical schools
视频讲解：如何写并列结构？

作业:
所有同学：选择以上方法之一, 改写abc
A: free education
B: equip people with knowledge and skills
C: help them find promising jobs
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