6.5分VS7分，评分标准精讲：Task Response

说好的哈,这周分别讲解评分标准,因为大部分都在澳大利亚,我们只看6.5和7.5的区别,不建议把目标定位在7分, 不大安全,压分很普遍

雅思写作共有4个评分标准, 分别是：

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

了解4个项目6.5分和7.5分的要求,非常重要,这样你才可以知道自己为什么总停留在6.5分！和7.5分的差距到底在哪里。

认真阅读今天的课程吧

Task Response 6.5 VS 7.5

课程材料来自剑桥雅思5-11所有范文,包括考官评语

Learning objectives:

理解6.5分和7.5分 Task Response 的2个特点（为什么得了6.5.为什么得不到7）

理解这些特点在文章中的体现

小测验：识别6.5分和7.5分的文章

Task Response

6.5分评语

This script answers both parts of the task and presents a clear opinion on the issues. There are relevant main ideas, although the supporting examples are sometimes less appropriate.

6.5原因：

主要观点没有跑题,也就是说你的Reasons是对的

无法得7原因：

论证展开的时候跑题了！可能是例子写错了。

7.5分评语

Version1:

This is a thoughtful and well-argued response to the task.

The candidate examines the opposing views of the topic and gives a

clear opinion that is well developed and supported.

To reach the highest band, a more clearly-signalled conclusion would be needed.

Version2:

The writer introduces the topic, examines both sides of the argument and expresses a clear position. points are well-developed and with examples.

7.5分原因:

对比6.5分的论点： “ relevant main ideas” 相关的ideas, 你的论证更加 “thoughtful” 体现在ABC的正确使用。

使用相关的例子,例子可以支持论点。

无法得到8分原因：

结尾不清楚

所以你们看到6.5和7.5的区别只是2个:

展开论点的具体,合理性 ABC 词组以及 Idea map 的理解

是否给了例子,而且你的例子可以支持论点

下面两个段落, 6.5 VS 7.5分,理解一下区别

6.5

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these prolems and what meausures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, people are getting more and more lazy. They want convience in everything when they come home from work, they will have microwared dinner or fast food so that they do not have to take the trouble to prepare a meal or wash up after dinner. The introduction of fast food is also the main cause of unhealthy living. People are opting a fast food restaurant meal rather than a simple homecooked meal. Yes, your burgers and pizzas tasted better than a homecooked meal but think of all the calories you are swallowing （这里在评价这个行为,没有解释为什么喜欢 fast food 是 unhealthy 的原因, 可以说因为大家都很忙啊,所以fast food，所以变胖）.

7.5

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.

原因:广告的影响

具体解释：

广告里面的东西都很好看

所以购买的时候不考虑

而且,也会影响其他人,因为大家都买1个东西,就会形成trend,影响其他人也购买

（这里就是你们经常问的,如果ABC有DEF怎么办？继续写 Furthermore 啊可以少背诵1组ABC ）

小测验

下面是1个VIP同学的作业,你们猜猜Task Response多少分？

为什么？

进入公众号回复 “签到答案”，获得完整评语

Admittedly, a multicultural society also has some drawbacks. Compared with people who live in a society that is dominated by only one culture, those living with people from different cultures and ethnic groups tend to weaken their individualism. This is because they may adopt foreign values, beliefs and behavior blindly, which impairs their identities. Nevertheless, the argument above cannot be completely justified. There are other factors like growing environment, educational background and sense of family will also affect what a person think or behave. For instance, a child who were brought up in a traditional family and protected well from other cultures may not be effected by others.

外教评语：