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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than those who lived in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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1.一定要在文章中出现21世纪和之前的比较
2.该类型的题目写一边倒和让步讨论得分一样,并没有哪种结构得分高一说
3.如果想要文章脱颖而出,就必须出现一些地道好词,而不是都是平庸的比如make our lives easier / convenient 之类的表达,同学们可以看一下范文中黄老师是如何使用高分词汇的
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2022.3.12真题
People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than those who lived in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
满分词汇:
acquaintancen. 熟人
as opposite to 而不是
state-of-the-art adj. 高精尖
fitness n. 健壮
toxin n. 毒素
urban runoff n. 城市污水
strain v. 使…收到压力
好处段1:
Innovation of communication in this century has offered the opportunity for people to re-connect with their old friends and acquaintances, make new friends, share content and pictures, and many other activities in a convenient way like never before. We would still be sitting by a candle and writing a letter to get in touch with a friend, as opposite to sitting in front of the computer and logging into Facebook to contact a friend if it wasn’t for certain inventions - mobile phones, social media, and any other telecommunication means - that were so incredible that had enough impact to change the whole world forever.
好处2(补充):
Compared with people from the last century, who lacked state-of-the-art medical treatment, people nowadays have doubled their life span with a relatively high fitness level to assist them in accomplishing their dreams after their retirement.
坏处段:(同学们可以在任意地方自行添加过去比较)
However, Human activity is leading to the extinction of species and habitats and loss of bio-diversity over this century. Heavy metals, nitrates and plastic are toxins responsible for pollution: water pollution is caused by oil spill, acid rain, urban runoff; air pollution is caused by various gases and toxins released by industries and factories and combustion of fossil fuels; soil pollution is majorly caused by industrial waste that deprives soil from essential nutrients. Furthermore, population explosion in less developed and developing countries is straining the already scarce resources.

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