各位学霸们好,今天黄老师给大家带来本周六(2021.9.25)雅思大作文真题以及范文解析,本周题目如下:

2021.9.25真题
People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who often change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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题目分析
本周大作文题目非常典型,属于工作成就类的题目,这类题出现的频率很高,所以黄老师强烈推荐同学们收藏下面的范文,并且背诵其中好词好句,这些词句在工作成就类的其他文章中也是可以用到,让考官眼前一亮的!
对于这道题来说,同学们需要注意:题目中出现的换和不换工作都必须讨论到的,不能只讨论一边。
而且,对于这类公说公有理婆说婆有理的题目,黄老师推荐大家写中和结论,也就是:
-换工作的好处
-不换工作的好处
-换还是不换工作取决于个人/具体的情况,不能说一定是哪个好
这类结论在客观事实上更加的可信,所以文章也容易拿高分。但是同学们请注意:在写中和结论的时候,一定需要出现一个明确的个人立场
✅ 换还是不换工作取决于个人/具体的情况。
❎ 这件事情很复杂,还需要进一步的讨论。(这样的结论就会被考官认为是无结论,从而扣掉大量的分数)
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满分词汇
对于这道题来说,可以使用的部分8分词汇如下:(全部好词见范文)
Job hopping / switch 换工作
steady jobs 铁饭碗
seasoned worker 老练的工人
repetitively adv. 重复的
plummet v. 直线下降
morale n. 士气
step out of comfort zone 跳出舒适区
overoptimism n. 过度乐观
a rush of blood  头脑一热(的决定)
mature decision 成熟的决定
那么,接下来我们就来看范文吧!同学们可以看看黄老师是如何使用这些词的:
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正反面段落/中和段落
2021.9.25真题
People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who often change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
反面段:
Job hopping can be one of the most stressful occasions in one’s working life. Those with a steady jobs may have spent years as part of an organization, becoming an integrated part of its office culture. Their routines, habits and small daily rituals – such as when and where to take coffee breaks – will not be carried with them to a new job, and leaving that type of familiar environment behind can be frightening for even the most seasoned worker.
正面段:
However, doing the same task repetitively will plummet one’s morale, leaving him or her unenthusiastic and not ready to jump on opportunities when they arise. What is more, Sometimes people may find themselves unable to advance their personal base of career-specific knowledge by repeating the tasks which appears to be similar in their jobs, which means it might be better to step out of comfort zone to find a more challenging - yet possibly more rewarding - job. 
中和段:
A sheer number of evidences can be found for job hoppers who find themselves more satisfied jobs or end up with tragedy, while the same can be applied to  those who have never changed their jobs. Therefore, when considering job switch, neither overoptimism nor overpessimism will help; instead, rather than a rush of blood, this should be a mature decision after thorough consideration with a range of factors taken into account.  


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