上周（4.10）雅思大作文真题范文&report类文章常见错误点

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来上周六（2021.4.10）雅思大作文范文 & 解析，上周考题如下：

Bicycle is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

题目解析

该题为report类型的题目，同学们需要讨论原因和解决措施。这类题型常见的错误有如下几点：

1.文章开头结尾出现个人立场（站边）。

report类型的题目都不需要同学们站边的（比如：我同意这件事 / 这件事是好事）。对于该题大家只需要把原因和解决措施列出即可，千万不要在文章的开头结尾多此一举出现个人立场，否则task response项会严重扣分。

2.原因太泛泛。

不少同学在写原因的时候会写的太泛，比如因为科技的发展，因为社会的进步。这类信息可以成为任何问题的原因，所以反过来他们就不能成为任何问题的原因。同学们在写原因的时候一定要针对到题干的核心词来描述，比如（无现金社会 - 电子支付科技），这一点同学们请切记。

3.解决方案假大空

和原因类似，在写解决方案的时候，很多人的方案非常的‘口号化’，也就是我们俗称的假大空，比如：如何让人们健康的生活 - 我们得呼吁人们采取一种健康的生活方式，摒弃不健康的习惯。同学们可以发现，这类的解决措施更多的是‘口号’而不是‘措施’，换句话来说就是无法落实的行为。所以同学们请切记：在写解决方案的时候，一定要写可以落实的行为，而不是假大空的口号。

同学们可以带着上面的思路，看看黄老师范文中的原因和措施是怎么样具体点题的。（范文均为黄老师参考英文期刊文献写出，里面词句搭配均为地道搭配，可以直接背诵哦！）

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2021.04.10真题

Bicycle is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

满分词汇：

marginal adj. 边缘的

put bikers off cycling 阻止某人做某事（biker / cycling可以替代题干bicycle）

shared zones 共享区域

substandard adj. 低于标准的额

commuters n. 通勤者

municipality n. 市政

rack n. (自行车)架

ridership n. 乘车

transit user n. 交通工具使用者

原因段：

There are a number of reasons that have reduced cycling to very much a marginal form of transport. Firstly, dangerous driving is the most likely reason to put bikers off cycling, considering the fact that roads are dominated by cars. Bike commute comprises roads with parked cars lining the sides, drivers passing way too close and shouting abuse when bikers take up the middle, and generally driving over speed limit in shared zones. Furthermore, in various places in the world, what stops people from cycling more often is having to do it on a transport network designed solely for cars: a network that has for decades so effectively "designed out" cycling that rates of cycling could hardly be any lower if was made illegal.

解决段：

One measure to effectively encouraging cycling is to improve the existing substandard cycle infrastructure across a country. By providing more and wider cycle paths, it would reduce pressure on inexperienced cyclists to share the road with cars, motorcycles, buses and lorries. In this way, they will have a safer alternative, which might be all it takes to convince more people to get on their bike. In addition, considering that some journeys commuters wish to take may be impractical by bicycle, it is essential to improve links between bicycles and public transportation. It is recommended for municipality to provide necessary bicycle parking at local bus and train stations. Besides, having the ability to bring a bike on public transportation is another crucial link between these two modes of travel. This connection is not only beneficial for cyclists, who benefit from expanded travel options because of these racks, but it is also valuable to transit agencies who may witness increases in ridership with the addition of cyclists as new transit users.

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