各位学霸们好,今天黄老师给大家带来2021.2.20雅思A类大作文解析和范文,本周真题如下:
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
题目分析

该题属于老题重现了,对于这一类双方比较的题目很多同学不知道文章应该如何分段和给结论,这里黄老师给大家几种方案:
1.简单版 - 一边倒
结论:应该少学习多运动(或者反过来)
注意:即便写一边倒结论同学们也需要在文章中间段同时提到运动和学习,而不能单方面的只论证一边。
2.进阶版 - 中和法
结论:在运动和学习中需要找到一个平衡
注意:对于这类两边都有道理的题目其实写中和法更加容易出彩,因为事实就是这样的。该类方法段落分配也较为简单:
第一段- 为什么孩子要花时间学习
第二段- 为什么孩子要花时间运动
第三段- 平衡学习和运动时间的重要性
这里黄老师的范文就是用的中和法,同学们可以参照一下(特别是中和段的写法)
最后,黄老师想说一下:最近的题目出的都非常的巧妙,也就是题干看似平平无奇,但是极其容易写跑题!所以黄老师推荐同学们一定要解决自己的逻辑问题,在逻辑正确的基础上再训练语法和词汇能力,这样才能做到短期提分。
那么,我们来看范文吧!
满分词汇/高分答案
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2021.2.20真题
Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
满分词汇
literacy and numeracy skills n. 语数能力
tedious adj. 无聊的
play-centered approaches n. 寓教于乐
self-esteem n. 自尊心
cognitive skills n. 认知能力
counterproductive adj. 反效果的
overwhelm adj. 过量
sedentary adj. 久坐不动的
学习段
It is essential for children to spend time on acquiring literacy and numeracy skills, which form a foundation for education and have a dramatic impact on their academic success later in life. However, it is by no means tedious and repetitive reading, writing and counting; parents can employ various play-centered approaches to allow children to learn literacy skills by listening to stories, talking about pictures, and to learn numeracy skills by singing and playing music, or pouring sand into containers of different sizes. Therefore, children should be encouraged to spend time on these actively fun forms of study.
锻炼段
On the other hand, encouraging child to spend a proper amount of time to be physically active sets them up to be active and healthy for their whole lives, while aside from physical benefits, it also allows children to have a better outlook on life by building confidence and increasing self-esteem and cognitive skills.
中和段
However, spending excessive amount of time on either of them can be counterproductiveoverwhelm in study can lead to a sedentary lifestyle and autism while excessive physical activities can result in injuries and lack of academic ability. Therefore, it is vital for children to be properly guided in order to strike a balance between study and exercise.
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