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Some people believe that governments should not support the arts (painting, music, sculpture) but rather  should support other areas such as public health or education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
More government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country's development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Uni students should pay for the full cost of education fees because uni education benefits themselves rather than the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这样呢？ 
Some people believe that governments should not support the arts (painting, music, sculpture) but rather  should support other areas such as public health or education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
More government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country's development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
University students should pay for the full cost of education fees because university education benefits themselves rather than the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
每个问题里面都有 rather than 哇
题目的结构都是 A rather than B 
只需要写2个Body 段落
开头：我认为A和B都是对的
Body 1: A 是对的
Body 2: B 也是对的
结尾：所以A和B都是对的阿
例子:
Some people believe that governments should not support the arts (painting, music, sculpture) but rather  should support other areas such as public health or education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
开头：政府应该投资艺术,也应该投资其他领域
Body 1: 投资艺术好
Body 2: 投资其他领域也要
结尾：所以,应该都投资
你知道下面的结构套路吗？ 
题目核心词关系-决定你的观点－决定文章结构
题目核心词关系-决定你的观点－决定文章结构
题目核心词关系-决定你的观点－决定文章结构
例题： 
Some people believe that governments should not support the arts (painting, music, sculpture) but rather  should support other areas such as public health or education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
按照下图思考
题目里面有2个核心词,并且可以并存
政府可以 同时支持艺术,也可以支持其他领域
support the arts
support other areas such as public health or education 
2. 所有,我们选择 two concepts 的结构
用平衡结构
开头：政府应该投资艺术,也应该投资其他领域
Body 1: 投资艺术好
Body 2: 投资其他领域也要
结尾：所以,应该都投资
有没有觉得逻辑图很神奇呢？ 
清楚得告诉你, 每个句子的功能！
句子之间的关系！
句子功能：
段落首句：Topic Sentence 
原因句: Reason 
解释,支持句：Explain 
句子间的关系：
Reason 以后最好加2个 Explain 
范文解析更能帮助你理解哇
There has been some debate about whether the arts or public sectors like health or education are more worthy of government funding （背景）. I believe that both fields need to be supported （你的观点）.
It is imperative for the government to support the arts (TS).For one thing, this investment can strengthen a nation’s cultural identity (R-原因). Specifically, government’s fundingfor protecting and maintaining works of art will help with keeping the traditions,customs and beliefs embedded in those works alive, thereby preserving the country’s cultural heritage (E－解释).In addition, spending a greater amount of money on the arts would raise people’s standard of living (R－原因). For example, in Vienna, the government devoted an immense amount of funding to establish a wide range of free cultural activities (E－解释). It is these events that provide residents an abundance of opportunities to unwind and find relief from their stress and anxiety (E－解释).
Nevertheless, governments should not disregard education and public health (TS).Undeniably; high-quality educational institutions benefit a country’s economy (R). Equipping people with advanced knowledge develops individuals’ expertise, which helps them evolve into capable and competitive employees, thereby enabling them to live comfortable lives and driving overall economic development in the long term (E).Likewise, funding public health is essential (R). Compared with countries that have poor public health systems, countries provide affordable and effective treatments for diseases have healthier populations, and their governments are regarded as more responsible (E). Therefore, developments in both education and health are closely connected to the wellbeing of individuals and society as a whole.
In conclusion, neither the value of the arts nor of education and public health can be disregarded (summary).Therefore, government funding needs to be apportioned in all areas appropriately (YO).
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