读《1984》|Chapter 1_Part 1
从今天开始阅读George Orwell的Nineteen Eighty-Four (《1984》)。以为每个章节写一份笔记的形式分享学习成果。
思维导图笔记
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摘抄
  1. He had been stricken immediately by and overwhelming desire to possess it.
  2. He felt deeply drawn to him, and not solely because...
  3. Winston had disliked her from the very first moment of seeing her.
  4. People simply disappeared, always during the night. Your name was removed from the registers, every record of everything you had ever done was wiped out, and your one-time existence was denied and forgotten. You were abolished, annihilated.
应用
前三句讲述的是主角Winston对本子、女人、O’Brien的第一印象。喜不喜欢可能看一眼就知道。在写作的时候可以借用这种“一见到...就被吸引/讨厌”的句型。
第4句讲述的是人们卑微的命运。一旦被除掉,所有的历史记录都会被抹掉。就像古代深宫里的奴才一样,他们的命运一点都不值钱。奥威尔用朴素的口吻将一个恐怖的景象描述了出来。我们在写作的时候也应该增加文字的力度。

请查看用思维导图,给生活加点料|25》,参考思维导图的制作方法。
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